I don't even know what to say, love. You're so amazing and this is amazing and everything is amazing. I kind of want to bite you now. ....This is what vampire pieces do to me. They make me crave neck. (Maine just laughed.)
How dare Addison sleep with Paaaauuuulllll! SHE WILL RUE THE DAY! Rue it. I'm not sure how, but somehow Mischa will....do something. I don't know, I'm not good at revenge/jealousy. It's a foreign concept to me. But I will learn it for him.
So you were worried about this not saying enough? Psh psh psh. This says a lot. Especially about Mischa (which I love because I always get super infatuated with my own characters when you write them.) and his perpetual teenagedom.
I like how you focused on his vampire aspects, the hunger that drives him to act like a bit of a fool. Or so I blame the vampire side, when really it's just him all together. I am contradicting myself all over the place here.
...2,174 words is a lot. I'm like wow, really freaking impressed and I know I've told you this before but it bares (bears? It bares all kind of bears!) repeating.
There will be a lot of rereading this and probably more comments, so be prepared for random "Holy. Moley." style things flooding your inbox.
2,174 words! Woot! Do a little dance, my sweet and pat yourself on the back. Maybe spike your hot chocolate in celebration!
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I don't even know what to say, love. You're so amazing and this is amazing and everything is amazing. I kind of want to bite you now. ....This is what vampire pieces do to me. They make me crave neck. (Maine just laughed.)
How dare Addison sleep with Paaaauuuulllll! SHE WILL RUE THE DAY! Rue it. I'm not sure how, but somehow Mischa will....do something. I don't know, I'm not good at revenge/jealousy. It's a foreign concept to me. But I will learn it for him.
So you were worried about this not saying enough? Psh psh psh. This says a lot. Especially about Mischa (which I love because I always get super infatuated with my own characters when you write them.) and his perpetual teenagedom.
I like how you focused on his vampire aspects, the hunger that drives him to act like a bit of a fool. Or so I blame the vampire side, when really it's just him all together. I am contradicting myself all over the place here.
...2,174 words is a lot. I'm like wow, really freaking impressed and I know I've told you this before but it bares (bears? It bares all kind of bears!) repeating.
There will be a lot of rereading this and probably more comments, so be prepared for random "Holy. Moley." style things flooding your inbox.
2,174 words! Woot! Do a little dance, my sweet and pat yourself on the back. Maybe spike your hot chocolate in celebration!