May. 17th, 2011 at 5:09 PM
I, apparently, love parenthesizes too.
And vampires.
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There was something soft in her still.
A smell of violets and crushed chrysanthemums.
The way she moved her small hands was unnerving. Cunning and elegant, like an adult. Lestat loved those hands and the startling amount of strength they possessed; Louis was troubled by them until, before the death-like sleep claimed them like lovers, she would curl her fingers around the ends of his hair. Thirty years, and she still persisted in that affectionate claiming. In his adoration, Louis could never understand (he was always one to be blindsided).
He watched her (velvet and damask dresses, lace details that Louis shaped into bows), had heels fashioned in every color she desired delivered at dusk (so small, her white feet. Whiter than the chaste silk stockings they, as fathers, preferred her to wear). And he did not noticed when her bemused allowance turned to boredom to disdain. Now, she brushed her hair, more golden than saffron, and contemplated the complexity of her reflection. Her eyes betrayed her, revealed the struggle she fought within, but Lestat would say something charming, something devilishly tempting, and Claudia would smile. Laugh with her tinkling, silver bell of a voice. Like a mourning widow, she hid her trouble behind a veil.
The monstrosity of being her.
Comments
Use this power wisely, young lady.
That ending line was so perfect. Pudding, twitterpation, whatever you want to call it, it's happening. All. Up. In. Here. <3
Also, why can't I currently find any of these books in my boxes? Damn it.
I know that Claudia becomes very manipulative and cruel, but still possesses a vulnerability that correlates with her child-like appearance and her inability to really fend for herself because of that. So, I'm excited to toy around with that aspect of her. Maharet is feeling a little cheated at the moment.
Every time you use twitterpation I think of that Bambi owl. Makes me laugh.